I really loved Spinning Into Butter. Seriously, I wish we were spending another week on it, because there’s just so much left to say.
First off, I think the fact that Simon is never onstage is brilliant. Instead of showing the audience who he is, and how others react to him when in the same room as him, our view of him is solely from how everyone else sees him, whether its Sarah, Strauss, or Meyers. Like how you can know of a person before you get to know them. You draw your own conclusions on them based on the opinions of others, and can even grow to dislike them even before seeing their face. Lord knows I’ve been guilty of it in the past. To some extent, so has everyone.
The fact that Gilman didn’t want to write Simon because she is white, though it’s the tinyest bit of a cop-out… as I writer, I can see where she’s coming from. People tell you to “write what you know.” There are times where I’ve baulked at writing certain characters, or even setting my stories in certain time periods… because I don’t feel like I have the authority. Most of my stuff is set in present day (1980′s-2000′s), because that is what I know. Even when I try to research a specific time period, I always feel like I don’t know enough to be able to do it justice. Most of the characters I’ve written have been white (or, alternately, unspecified). Be it black, Asian, Hispanic, Native American, whatever, I always feel that there is so much to these cultures… their speech, their history, their dress, their attitudes, etc. that it is just so daunting that I shy away.
Then there are the white writers who try, and fail miserably. There’s this one crime novelist, Jeffery Deaver, whose books are quite enjoyable when you are sick of classic literature. Engaging plots, and well-written characters. But one of them, The Twelfth Card, mostly takes place in Harlem. The plot was still top-notch… but let me tell you, the dialouge was downright AWFUL. Whenever Deaver had the black characters talking, I wanted to shoot myself. It was so forced, and unrealistic, and everytime he used a piece of slang like, “dawg” he felt the need to explain it’s meaning to the reader. “Oh hey look you guys, I did my research! Look I can write black characters!” You can tell it’s some pasty white guy writing this drivel, because the dialogue is written the way white people think black people talk. I really wish my copy wasn’t 2 hours away from here, because I would totally pick out some choice phrases for you all.
Jeffery Deaver’s failure in writing characters of a different ethinicity than himself has turned me off nearly completely from even wanting to attempt it. I’m too afraid of the shit writing that would inevitably come from it.
I know how blacks, Asians, Hispanics, Native Americans, etc. talk. I pay way too much attention to people’s speech patterns not to know. I know when dialogue is spot-on, and I know when its off. But would I be able to recreate spot-on “ethnic” speech myself? Probably not. Hell, even with dialects that I have written, like Southern and Irish, I’ve never been 100% comfortable with how I write them.
I’m well aware how hypocritical this all sounds. Hell, it might even sound racist.
So, in conclusion, I can see why Gilman didn’t want to write Simon. I wouldn’t want to, either.
~Jessie